Now, the beginning was really dry, with all of the geography
and historical descriptions. Proably better to put all that in an appendix. I
think describing the actual town was good, with its stone houses, and
describing the Prancing Pony was fine too, and a good choice. But strangely
enough the hobbits themselves have never been described. Nor did I see any description
for Nob or Bob.
Early in the chapter, after the gatekeeper scene, there’s a
jarring point of a view switch where suddenly the narrative is no longer
covering Frodo, but is omniscient viewpoint of the gate itself. Tolkien writes:
“As soon as [the gatekeeper’s] back was turned, a dark
figure climbed quickly in over the gate and melted into the shadows of the
village street.”
Obviously this foreshadows that the black riders are in
Bree, but a paragraph break would have been really helpful in letting the
reader know about a different point of view.
Going back to the inn scene, I still remember Nob after all
of these years. Good old Bob. Nob and Bob. (Oin and Gloin, cough cough). And Barliman
Butterbur too, what a great name. I remember his absent mindedness as well,
which though cliché, for some reason this innkeeper in particular stuck with
me.
Nob states, about his role as a servant, “It’s hard work for
two legs, but I don’t get thinner.” Interesting to compare this to Shire
ideals, where fatter is sexier. Here in Bree it seems beauty is correlated more
with skinniness, as Nob seems to suggest that he wants to get thinner.
The best parts of course are the Strider interaction and the
accidently slip the ring on at the table scene. Strider blames Frodo for being
an idiot, but it may be the ring itself betrayed Frodo, showing that even the
best-laid plans could go amiss. I think Frodo was right to try and shut Pippin
up, but better yet they should have just stayed in their rooms.
Of course, then they may not have met Strider, though it
seems that Strider was aware of the ring and Frodo Baggins, so I think Strider
would have found them anyway. Long story short, the hobbits never have seemed
very bright so far. Even Merry, who cautions them before they go into the
common room, decides to take a stroll when black riders may be about.
All of this goes back to Gandalf’s blunder. Certainly I can
understand to some degree the hobbits incompetence—they are inexperienced
adventures who don’t really know yet what they’re up against, besides Gildor’s
warning. But Gandalf, he should have known about this, and he should have sent
Frodo packing much sooner than he did. Wasn’t the language of Mordor on a
golden ring enough? The stupidity of the wise old wizard still astounds me. All
of this could have been easily avoided, but then I guess we wouldn’t have a
story then, would we?
I note in my comments on the "Strider" chapter that it feels like Strider at last vocalizes the utter incompetence of the Hobbits thus far in their adventure. Also in that chapter, we learn that Gandalf DID try to warn Frodo earlier, but it was Butterbur's incompetence, not Gandalfs, that delayed the warning! As for the other charges laid against Gandalf's intelligence? I'm still willing to hold out hope that Gandalf will be able to explain himself later on!
ReplyDeleteIf I recall correctly, we will get an explanation of why Gandalf went haring off without returning to the Shire. We'll have to see whether it holds up to snuff.
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