"The Stairs of Cirith Ungol" - Eric's Thoughts

While the previous chapter (Crossroads) seems to be filler material to lend credibility of how long the journey is, it lacked any palpable form of external antagonist (other than the terrain) or internal struggle. That is why that chapter was not particularly compelling, and I agree with Ben and Jacob that some pruning was in order.

This chapter alleviates what was lacking in the previous chapter and has some very compelling moments. Three stood out in particular.

The first, of course, is the internal confrontation between Frodo and the Ringwraith. Note that the confrontation was internal, not external. No swords are parried, no bullets flying in the air, but the language here was more compelling than Helm's Deep: "Frodo waited, like a bird at the approach of a snake, unable to move. And as he waited, he felt, more urgent than ever before, the command that he should put on the Ring. But great as the pressure was, he felt no inclination now to yield to it."

The reader turns the page, literally, to determine if Frodo will put on the Ring. As we know from the Fellowship, if Frodo puts on the Ring here, he is doomed. Yet, somehow Frodo is drawn to put the Ring on. The reader knows the stakes; Tolkien does not have to say them outright. At first it seems Frodo is tempted, then he knows putting it on would not lend him the strength to fight the Witch King, but then his finger draws ever closer nonetheless. It's a compelling back and forth internal dialogue wrought with inconsistency -- and that is why it is so interesting to watch. Finally, a magic token takes him out of the spell, and the Witch King is vanquished, merely moving on with his armies to continue in his quest to destroy the entirety of Gondor. Frodo, reflecting on the vast size of Sauron's armies and how even if he did the impossible and destroyed the Ring, says "'There will be no one I can tell. It will be in vain.' Overcome with weakness he wept. And still the host of Morgul crossed the bridge." Frodo emerges triumphant, yet his great victory is still not enough to overcome inevitable defeat.

Second, as my fellow readers note, is the interesting diversion into metafiction. Sam and Frodo's dialogue, discussing how Lord of the Rings is nothing but a story, makes the characters feel even more real than before. Interestingly, just as Tolkien did, Robert Jordan in the Wheel of Time used this technique regularly -- sometimes having the main character Rand reflect that doing things in reality were much more difficult than what he had read in stories. What Rand, and Sam and Frodo have observed is a thought real people often have, so characters that reflect on how their lives relate to stories they've read lends the character almost an air of credibility. Sam says, "I wonder what sort of a tale we’ve fallen into?’" A reader too can't help but wonder what sort of tale he has fallen into, and what legacy he will leave behind.

Third, the marvelously written dialogue between Sam and Gollum. Tolkien really shines at his best when he's writing dialogue for Smeagol. After Gollum sneaks off and returns, he shows a glimpse of humanity, almost as if he's regretting his decision to betray his friends (revealed in the next chapter). Sam calls Gollum a sneak, chastises him, and Gollum's eyes turn green, symbolizing that his brief moment of humanity is gone. The dialogue that ensues is tragic, but similarly hilarious. Gollum mutters, "‘No food, no rest, nothing for Sméagol,’ said Gollum. ‘He’s a sneak.’"

"'Don’t take names to yourself, Sméagol,’ said Frodo. ‘It’s unwise, whether they are true or false.'"

"'Sméagol has to take what’s given him,’" answered Gollum. "‘He was given that name by kind Master Samwise, the hobbit that knows so much.’"

Gollum plays the victim (is he just deranged or purely manipulative?), when it is he that is about to betray the Hobbits, demonstrating the psychological complexity of this tragic creature.